Crazy Son [prologue Part 2] By Crazy Wanker Review

: By lowering your own status as the author, you gain the freedom to say the unsayable.

: It forces the reader to question everything. Is the son actually crazy, or is the narrator simply incapable of processing reality? 🌀 What a Prologue Part 2 Needs to Accomplish Crazy Son [Prologue Part 2] By Crazy Wanker

: Move away from exposition. Describe the smell of the room, the twitch in the son's jaw, or the heavy, ringing silence after an argument. : By lowering your own status as the

: Often, when a narrator labels a character as "crazy," it is a defense mechanism. It is easier to call a son crazy than it is to admit we do not understand the architecture of his mind. 🌀 What a Prologue Part 2 Needs to

: End the prologue with a line or an action that ensures the characters can never go back to the way things were in Part 1.

: Traditional stories teach us that parents mold their children. But what happens when the child is born with a frequency that the parents cannot tune into?

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